Hey Luke, Rome here from Te Awamutu Primary School. You did well doing your haiku poem and very good at describing what's in a haunted house. Can't wait to see you again.
Kia Ora Luke, You have done an excellent job of your creative writing about the haunted house. Your background looks real and gives me goosebumps! You have described the haunted house incredibly well and it paints a picture in my head. I had a dream once and I was in a haunted house with witches trying to steal my cookie! Where did you get your ideas from. Room 2 collaborative comment
Hey Luke, Rome here from Te Awamutu Primary School. You did well doing your haiku poem and very good at describing what's in a haunted house. Can't wait to see you again.
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ReplyDeleteHi I am Jenna from Te Awamutu Primary School. Your poem is so scary. I also like the picture it combines with your poem very well.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Luke,
ReplyDeleteYou have done an excellent job of your creative writing about the haunted house. Your background looks real and gives me goosebumps! You have described the haunted house incredibly well and it paints a picture in my head. I had a dream once and I was in a haunted house with witches trying to steal my cookie! Where did you get your ideas from.
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I like how you writed evil eyes at the end
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